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I want to feel the blade cut through my skin
I want to see the blood flow from my veins
I want the hate to disappear

I don't want to realise what I've done
I don't want to wear the scars
I don't want the hate to return  
Felt kinda bad when I woke up this morning :(
So I wrote this.
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Tazz97 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
pretty awesome poem! kinda explains my life lol :)
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TheRuinsOfMan Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Writer
Sweets please talk to me if you want to ..

but its a very strong poem and it totally deserves to be in the group ":)
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:icontheruinsofman:
TheRuinsOfMan Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey thanks. I'm feeling better now. :)
Thanks for the fav!
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Writer
Oh sure thing anything to help a fellow poet
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djdanilly Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Professional General Artist
Note me, if you need to vent, I am a counselor.
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:icontheruinsofman:
TheRuinsOfMan Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, I'm feeling better for now, but I'll keep this in mind in the future. :)
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DizzyAbberation Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"I want to" should be "I need to"
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TheRuinsOfMan Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're right.
I wrote this kinda quickly without much editing.
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DizzyAbberation Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Or proofreading.
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